In honor of poetry month (April), the students in class YL 4 have been learning about and writing different styles of poetry. Some of the types of poetry they have written include: alliteration, character analysis, diamante, music inspired, and grouping. Read our poems and let us know what you think.
COLD:
ReplyDeleteYour heart is cold like an ice
Completely empty inside
Only beat without feelings
Your heart only feels fear and lonliness
Like a homeless in a big,alone,city
Stiven was in a supermarket
ReplyDeletewhen he shooted Sofía.
He hates Sofía becouse she talk with his friend Sam.
Stiven across the sea and arrived Santo Domingo.
The police was looking for him.
Stiven was eating sausages in a store
when the police find him.
STIVEN´S CRIME (by Sofía & Karlota)
the guilt is the reflexion of our fears
our fears close our mind
our mind is our weapon
our weapon is the door to death
the door to death is always opened
FEAR (by Kristina & Karlota)
We past the card around the class and each one wrote one line of the poem.
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the river that flows in your soul,
Is cold as the ice
Fast during the day, but slow at night
It is depth on the mountain of your feelings
the end of the river is your life
These are great! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteTHE COUNTRY
ReplyDeleteThe relax country.
I could hear the birds
speak me when they song.
Sunset was eternity,
the blue of sky was like a sea.
A POEM:
I left behind too many things,
too many importants things for me.
I go outside,
and my family stay behind,
and my friends stay behind,
and my life stay behind.
By Karlota & KRiiS & Jose
When I was young,
one day,
started to rain.
first started smooth,
but suddenly appeared the thunder,
and I was scary,
and I covered behind the tree.
Molly went to the moon
ReplyDeleteShe was lookin for the macaronni's moustache
Molly didn't find it in the moon so she went to Miami
The macaroni's moustache wasn't in Miami neither
So I told her
Mom, macaronis don't have moustaches
Those lines in the paper reminded me of you
Those points in the paper reminded me of the stars that iluminated our love
But that love is gone like you
That love is gone like your kisses
That love is gone like the stars that died with us
MUSIC
ReplyDeletelistening, singing, playing.
You can love it or hate it,
enyoing, jumping, dancing,
ugly, slowly,
song
NICE WORK EVERYONE!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about poetry is that there are no right or wrong answers. They are just words and phrases that are put together to express a feeling or idea.
Although I enjoyed reading all these poems, I think my favorite poems are: 1) Fear (Carlota), and 2) The Country.
"Fear" is an interesting poem because each line repeats and adds something new. "The Country" was a poem that was written while listening to a piece of opera music. I can imagine the same scene as this poem describes.
i likes all of the poems but the one that stand out most to me was the country by kriis that poem spoked alot.
ReplyDeleteWow- you guys are great poets! Congratulations to you all and thanks for corresponding with us in NYC this year. Our school year is over on Monday and computers have long been put away for the year, but I wanted to let you know that my students really enjoyed learning about you and your lives in Spain this year. I wish you all luck as you continue to learn English. Have a wonderful summer!
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